falling in love

This sounds like this could become an interesting story. There are a few spelling errors here and there where you left out letters or added some. It seems to be ...

Prologue: A revolver was shown in the moonlight as he passed the wide living room window. It contained six bullets, and he knew it. There was a purpose to that ...

I still love it and waiting for her to fall for him!!! No crit. Can't wait to read more.

Chapter One: *~Natalie~* I stepped out my car at the school entrance with the bus riders from the part of town that my prostitute mother lives, and joined the crowd ...

I just stumbled upon this looking at different things that have happened on the site. I'm pentecostal too! Isn't that awesome. To anyone who happens to stumble upon this like ...

The two people are telling their side of the story. They will come together as the story goes on. It's romance because they fall for each other in the end ...

I would enjoy reading more of this kind of stuff.

Funny, funny, funny. Bush a demon. Even though Clinton messed up with his own personal life, I like him better than any of them. Except for his problem. Bush is ...

Quite funny. He wanted to be the object spoon. Is there going to be more?

I loved it. Like Jennafish said, it is the cutest little vampire story I've ever read. When you put this part:..... “Eros,” I whispered, pushing him so that he lay ...

I like this piece. Is there going to be more? I want to know how Kara became the popular girl and vis versa. I hope there is more. I would ...

NOTE: Okay this isn't exactly what I'm used to writing. This isn't my stories based on the seventeenth and eighteenth century. I'm looking for a partner to help me on ...

How about this. I will post what I have so far on it and whoever likes what I've got so far is willing to help me write it. I will ...

It's good. I really enjoy this so far, but I think maybe I have missed some of the story. If I haven't then maybe you should add in what's going ...

I like it a lot. I like how you add her thoughts in and how she talks to the reader. I think that's really cool. Anyways, the end was funny. ...